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Re: Write a Fanfic... if you DARE (The Dare Thread)
« Reply #105 on: November 18, 2013, 03:27:52 AM »
It's mainly aimed at Elf for now- if it doesn't end up being her winner though, I may open it up for everyone.

Besides running the forum, I can provide avatars for people as well~
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Re: Write a Fanfic... if you DARE (The Dare Thread)
« Reply #106 on: November 18, 2013, 03:48:08 AM »
Same here, really.

As for Elf, here's one suitably dark: Archer gets summoned into a weird situation: Instead of a broken-up room and conveniently chair-shaped rubble, he finds himself summoned in the middle of the park, to a hastily-made summoning circle.

And Rin is being overrun by spiders the size of her abdomen.

In this grail war, people summon phantasmal beasts(Minotaur, Medusa, you know) to fight each other, and Archer somehow qualifies as a CG. He has to rip Rin away from all the spiders and fight his way through monstrosities of all shapes, sizes and varieties to keep both himself and his weakened master alive.

A hard task made worse, because it looks like one of the massive spiders stuck her with some paralytic agent of some kind, so she's dead weight and his prana is draining. And the smaller spiders have a mama, the size of a house.

Basically, Archer+dead weight Rin vs generic monsters until you're satisfied and you get Rin to wake up and certify the servant/master contract.

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Re: Write a Fanfic... if you DARE (The Dare Thread)
« Reply #107 on: November 21, 2013, 05:48:56 AM »
Names, you're evil, you know that?

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« Reply #108 on: November 21, 2013, 05:52:03 AM »
And hiring, but only as long as you don't know how stories work.

People who do and get hired by bad guys always end up betraying them to help the good guys. I learn from my predecessors' mistakes.

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« Reply #109 on: November 21, 2013, 05:52:54 AM »
Nice way of expanding upon the joke.

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« Reply #110 on: November 21, 2013, 05:54:59 AM »
Oh, thanks.

Sure it wasn't a bit too long as a follow-up, though?

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« Reply #111 on: November 21, 2013, 05:57:27 AM »
Nah, not really, it was just right for the circumstance.

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« Reply #112 on: November 21, 2013, 06:00:16 AM »
Alright, cool. I was worried I'd overdone it.

So, how's that dare going?

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« Reply #113 on: November 21, 2013, 06:02:21 AM »
Thanks for reminding me... however, if I were to look back on the writing for the dare, I'd probably wonder about my writing level.

Besides, I'm on my Desktop right now, and the dare's on my Laptop.

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« Reply #114 on: November 21, 2013, 06:04:57 AM »
Don't worry about your level, you'll naturally get better over time, checking your grammar and rethinking your wording.

Oh, and not giving up.

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« Reply #115 on: November 21, 2013, 06:16:38 AM »
Indeed.