...No. No, I've read the story. At least, what you've posted about it and from it.
It really has no true connection to the Nasuverse because the mechanics and concepts behind it are basically thrown out a window, beaten to death with a sledgehammer, then reanimated by running fishing line through the decaying corpse and using it like a puppet, and the puppeteer has no fucking clue what he's doing.
Really, for a story you already have apparently written out, the next chapter is taking an awfully long time to post. And the characterization of the characters we do see is so off and wrong that it makes no damn sense. They're like puppets on strings, except the person puppeting them has parkinsons and no idea how people actually live, talk, or act. It takes a lot of effort Lantz to get so much WRONG like you did. I have to give you props for that you really went the extra mile to screw things up.