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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #165 on: May 04, 2013, 04:25:32 AM »
It's a status thing in hell so yeah basically

Ah, OK, then that does sound somewhat interesting....

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #166 on: May 04, 2013, 04:36:44 AM »
I guess

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« Reply #167 on: May 04, 2013, 03:28:30 PM »
Hmm, well, I had the idea of Shinji ordering the demons to capture the other FSN characters (or, at least, the female ones...) and them being unable to do so. So, in order to avoid his wrath, they instead have some demons impersonate Sakura, Rin, Rider, Saber etc., and hand them over to him. He would then proceed to rape and torture them as he would if they were the real girls, whilst the real girls are still happily walking around ready to thwart his plans (and fucking Shirou etc...).

I think that would be rather amusing....

As for the two ideas more generally, I really need more context to come up with scenes (especially non-BDSM scenes). The ideas are just too broad right now, so we need to work out a plot etc. to fit the scenes to.

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« Reply #168 on: May 04, 2013, 05:30:56 PM »
The haerm thing is mainly to make fun of the idea of a harem, like carnival phantasm did but with lemon mixed in and a few character nods like castko and the mc or Shiki and kohaku etcetera. The demon sequel is already mostly explained

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« Reply #169 on: May 04, 2013, 06:06:15 PM »
The haerm thing is mainly to make fun of the idea of a harem, like carnival phantasm did but with lemon mixed in and a few character nods like castko and the mc or Shiki and kohaku etcetera.

Hmm, I see.

I'm just trying to think what sort of lemon to fit in there.

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The demon sequel is already mostly explained

Ah, OK.

Well, what do you think of my suggestion?

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #170 on: May 04, 2013, 06:17:53 PM »
It makes sense and doesn't hurt anyone so I'm okay with it

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #171 on: May 04, 2013, 06:19:06 PM »
It makes sense and doesn't hurt anyone so I'm okay with it

Well, the demons would get hurt, although they're doing it willingly....

It would definitely be amusing, though, particularly cutting from Shinji gloating about how he's defeated them all to them chatting, fucking each other etc.

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #172 on: May 04, 2013, 06:24:02 PM »
Jump cuts like that are tacky

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #173 on: May 04, 2013, 06:28:55 PM »
Jump cuts like that are tacky

Oh, OK, fair enough.

The basic concept still works, though. Shinji is torturing, raping and "breaking" demons that look like them (he'd particularly have fun with "Sakura" and "Rin", I suspect) whilst they're plotting how to overthrow him and having sex with each other.

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #174 on: May 04, 2013, 09:05:21 PM »
I should note Shinji is not an egotistical dick an more. He has an ego but it's not fixated on the usual suspects and it's mostly deserved rather then in canon where his ego is a psychological detriment

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #175 on: May 04, 2013, 09:26:28 PM »
I should note Shinji is not an egotistical dick an more. He has an ego but it's not fixated on the usual suspects and it's mostly deserved rather then in canon where his ego is a psychological detriment

I see....

Well, what does that mean for what I suggested?

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #176 on: May 04, 2013, 09:49:39 PM »
It means that rin and Sakura aren't special

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #177 on: May 04, 2013, 10:02:18 PM »
It means that rin and Sakura aren't special

Hmm, I see, so he'd want to abuse them all equally?

They are still sisters, though....

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #178 on: May 05, 2013, 12:43:47 AM »
Basically, not sure what you mean by the sisters bit

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #179 on: May 05, 2013, 01:02:38 AM »
Well, he can torment them by forcing them to perform sex acts on each other, watch each other being tortured (or even help) and so on....