Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

[Cherry Lover]

taking her home with him to recuperate

. Shirou accepts, because she's a horny succubus and seducing people is her job

way out of character

How?

Succubi are literally designed to seduce men. He gets all the benefits of that, he gets to relieve Sakura's suffering and he doesn't have to pay any price for it. What reason does he have to refuse?

Also, aren't Succubi supposed to go and seduce people, rather than relying on being summoned?

they can.

Well, that's one less-evil path Sakura could take, I guess, going out and hunting down rapists, murderers etc., seducing them and then draining them....

[lantzblades]

he's a knight and logically they don't fuck devils and demons. character change has to happen.

[Cherry Lover]

he's a knight and logically they don't fuck devils and demons. character change has to happen.

I see....

Well, how would we work that, then? Because Sakura is going to be seriously horny, to the point that it's causing her suffering.

[lantzblades]

she'll have to suffer with it then

[Cherry Lover]

she'll have to suffer with it then

This is supposed to be porn, you know....

[lantzblades]

if it were just that then I would have made it a one shot, with a continuing story you need consistency

[Cherry Lover]

if it were just that then I would have made it a one shot, with a continuing story you need consistency

Well, yes, true.

The point is that it could easily push him towards having sex with her, which is something we definitely do want to happen. At very least, she'd spend a lot of time seducing him, probably very aggressively (e.g. he'd wake up to find her giving him a tit-job...).

[lantzblades]

I think he might reconsider the all demons/devils are totally evil but frankly it wouldn't easily change him to jump into bed with her. although i can see the last part.

[Cherry Lover]

I think he might reconsider the all demons/devils are totally evil but frankly it wouldn't easily change him to jump into bed with her. although i can see the last part.

Well, perhaps not, but he might see that it is causing her problems. And, I don't think having a horny Succubus around is a particularly good plan. One possibility is that they could go see Rider, and then Rider could "relieve" her.

I would say she should definitely fuck Shirou, but possibly not straight away. Because, like you say, it's going to take quite a bit to convince him that not all devils are completely evil....

[lantzblades]

that works. have to decide the other characters and their relations.

[Cherry Lover]

that works. have to decide the other characters and their relations.

Yeah.

One thing we've not yet worked out is what race Caster is. Rin is obviously a demon, and Sakura's sister, I assume she'll be involved in punishing Caster at some point.

For the rest, I dunno. Who is even around?

[lantzblades]

I assume caster would be a witch but otherwise human, Bazzet would be an elf, dunno about saber etcetera yet.

[Cherry Lover]

I assume caster would be a witch but otherwise human, Bazzet would be an elf, dunno about saber etcetera yet.

Hmm, I was assuming Caster was an elf, but OK.

And, OK, fair enough. I don't know either, really....

[lantzblades]

elf works, magic user definitely

figuring saber would either be like shirou or a king.

[Cherry Lover]

elf works, magic user definitely

Yeah, makes sense.

figuring saber would either be like shirou or a king.

I thought they were all fantasy characters....