Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

[Cherry Lover]

i can't see a reason for an elf to capture a demon or devil except seeking power

Well, like I said, revenge for something. Perhaps a devil hurt her, or her family. Although, if the elf thing is the issue, then we could just make her a normal human....

The problem with the "seeking power" thing is that it means she won't really be trying to hurt Sakura, as such, just to experiment on her, and that gets in the way of what I'm aiming for with the scene.

[lantzblades]

it's not the elf thing just the magic user bit, summoning devils isn't something you just do, plus revenge isn't really viable, she would have become a crusader instead of a magic user.

[Cherry Lover]

it's not the elf thing just the magic user bit, summoning devils isn't something you just do, plus revenge isn't really viable, she would have become a crusader instead of a magic user.

I see....

Well, then how can we make the idea work? I don't get how what Caster is doing to Sakura is going to get her power.

[lantzblades]

i imagine draining her life force or such.

[Cherry Lover]

i imagine draining her life force or such.

Yeah, but how does that fit with torturing her?

[lantzblades]

it's magic? i dunno, magic is bizarre

[Cherry Lover]

it's magic? i dunno, magic is bizarre

Well, possibly. I guess it could be some weird thing where making her suffer more causes her life force to be drained....

[lantzblades]

generally having your life force drained hurts period

[Cherry Lover]

generally having your life force drained hurts period

Yes, of course, but that's not really the point. Sakura sitting in a cage screaming because she's being drained of her life force is hardly erotic, or particularly BDSMy....

[lantzblades]

just pointing it out,frankly you already set the concept up, i'm not worried about the mechanics atm, you don't need to worry about it, just figure out the scene as you see fit

[Cherry Lover]

just pointing it out,frankly you already set the concept up, i'm not worried about the mechanics atm, you don't need to worry about it, just figure out the scene as you see fit

What do you mean by that?

The basic concept of what I want for the scene is simple, Caster captures Sakura and tortures her for a few weeks, in a sexy manner, before Shirou rescues her. I don't know what motivation she'd have for doing that, though, aside from it turning her on (she's a sadist, and I definitely intend for her to gain sexual excitement from torturing Sakura, and to use her as a sex slave).

[lantzblades]

just ignore it.

[Cherry Lover]

just ignore it.

Ignore what?

[lantzblades]

the life draning think, as i said.

[Cherry Lover]

the life draning think, as i said.

Ah, OK.

Well, then, what are you asking for here? Are you asking me to give ideas for the nature of the torture etc.? That's what it sounded like from "figure out the scene as you see fit".