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Visual Novels / Recommendations?
« on: July 04, 2013, 04:02:19 AM »
I was thinking of trying some visual novels soon, when the big exams are over.
Any recommendations?
Any recommendations?
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Doujin Projects / Re: Ah, Viva Youth! (Fire Emblem Awakening Comic)
« on: July 04, 2013, 03:56:06 AM »
I wrote the same in your fanart thread, but I'll put it here as well
Dialogue!!! Need badly!!!
Overall it's interesting, though like Mike said, If you hadn't explained the story, I wouldn't have any idea about what's going on...besides the basics like a girl finds magic book and turns some poor mook who's probably her friend into a child, etc
Try shading, I think it'll help, even if you're going for simplistic....
Faces are a bit sharp and angular at times, like with the witch.
I also think you should try squashing their faces a little, I find that sharp long faces are usually male characters, whilst softer smaller faces work for girls
Actually, if you're going for no dialogue, you should add more symbols....I guess. Do giant banners introducing character names count as dialogue?
Besides that...TEACH ME about drawing body postures! They're soo hard, but you're soo good at it!
Dialogue!!! Need badly!!!
Overall it's interesting, though like Mike said, If you hadn't explained the story, I wouldn't have any idea about what's going on...besides the basics like a girl finds magic book and turns some poor mook who's probably her friend into a child, etc
Try shading, I think it'll help, even if you're going for simplistic....
Faces are a bit sharp and angular at times, like with the witch.
I also think you should try squashing their faces a little, I find that sharp long faces are usually male characters, whilst softer smaller faces work for girls
Actually, if you're going for no dialogue, you should add more symbols....I guess. Do giant banners introducing character names count as dialogue?
Besides that...TEACH ME about drawing body postures! They're soo hard, but you're soo good at it!
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The Art Gallery / Re: The KAIZAverse
« on: July 04, 2013, 03:45:09 AM »Overall it's interesting, though like Mike said, If you hadn't explained the story, I wouldn't have any idea about what's going on...besides the basics like a girl finds magic book and turns some poor mook who's probably her friend into a child, etc
Try shading, I think it'll help, even if you're going for simplistic....
Faces are a bit sharp and angular at times, like with the witch.
I also think you should try squashing their faces a little, I find that sharp long faces are usually male characters, whilst softer smaller faces work for girls
Besides that...TEACH ME about drawing body postures! They're soo hard, but you're soo good at it!
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Fan Clubs / Re: The Hollow Shrine
« on: July 04, 2013, 03:28:55 AM »
http://s2.zerochan.net/full/09/19/1403459.jpg
Hopefully it worked, if not check link
Tell me if that still doesn't work
Hopefully it worked, if not check link
Tell me if that still doesn't work
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Fan Clubs / Re: The Hollow Shrine
« on: July 04, 2013, 01:36:25 AM »
Crap, I'll fix it when I get on a comp
Used the wrong method for zerochan again...
Used the wrong method for zerochan again...
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Fan Clubs / Made of Swords
« on: June 20, 2013, 09:10:05 AM »
A fanclub dedicated to:
Emiya Shirou
The somewhat dimwitted boy who wishes to become a hero (and succeeds)
Members List:
Emiya Shirou
The somewhat dimwitted boy who wishes to become a hero (and succeeds)
Members List:
- OPOI
- Cherry Lover
- Alice
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Fan Clubs / Re: Cherry Blossom Club
« on: June 20, 2013, 09:02:37 AM »Today's offerings (people inform me if any of them are reposts):[/center]
ACK!
MAN DOWN
Join me up Mike!
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Fan Clubs / The Hollow Shrine
« on: June 19, 2013, 07:22:38 AM »
A fan club dedicated to Ryougi Shiki
Member List:
OPOI
Kat
Member List:
OPOI
Kat