Dark Side of the Moon
Type Moon => Fanfiction => Lantz's fics => Topic started by: lantzblades on July 02, 2013, 08:54:07 PM
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Ok while the discussion has suggested Rin as the protagonist as this is the first time that the quest has been posted here something simpler and more general would be better to get people used to the format.
the story is told in short bursts in second person, the story will not move ahead without the readers suggesting action for the protagonist to take. The character of course has their own ideas but unless the readers prompt the protagonist to speak his mind about a situation he/she will remain quiet and directed by the readers unless they do something out of character. Only the basic description of areas or items will be made without prompting by a reader
story
You, Emiya Shirou awaken early as you do on most mornings. The day is full of possibilities. What do you do?
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Go check the kitchen, see if Sakura and Fuji-nee have arrived yet.
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The kitchen and the living room are as they always are, clean and proper. Nothing touched and no one present at the moment.
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Shirou decides he should start on breakfast whilst he waits for Sakura and Fuji-nee to arrive.
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Breakfast is made in a little less then a half an hour but no one arrives with the table set
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Shirou is curious why they've not come around, like they usually do. He thinks it might be a good idea to attempt ringing them.
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Neither Fuji née nor Sakura answer
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Shirou is very worried about what might have happened to them, and decides to go and look for them. He decides to check Sakura's house first.
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Shirou head's to shinjis and meets Sakura on the way
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Shirou asks her why she didn't answer the phone when he called, and then walks back to his house with her.
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Sakura says Shinji left before her and she was out getting food for the house on the way back, Fujimura is not at or in the house.
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Shirou says he's worried about where Fuji-nee might be, and suggests to Sakura that they might want to go looking for her together.
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Taiga is not at her house, further Raiga didn't see her leave with Ilya
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Shirou mentally recalls the events that led to Ilya knowing Taiga, and explains them in his mind for the benefit of anyone who might be in there.
He also wonders if he should ask Sakura's sister if she's seen Fuji-nee.
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Rin is in London for the rest of the week. Ilya met Taiga during the grail war and took her in to keep shirous time free.
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Shirou wonders where Ilya is, if she's not with Taiga. He also wonders if Sakura's grandfather might have anything to do with Taiga's disappearance.
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Sakura's grandfather hasn't been seen since before the grail war so it is possible
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Shirou tries to recall what he knows about Sakura's grandfather, and the likelihood that he could be involved in what has happened to Taiga.
Meanwhile, he asks Sakura if she has any idea where Taiga might be, or indeed where Ilya might be.
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Shirou doesn't know much about zouken, Sakura doesn't know where taiga or ilya could be excepting shirou's house
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What happened to Sakura during and after the Grail War, and how did you come to know of her relationship to Rin? And, you should go check your house again just in case.
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Maybe asking Lancer or Archer might be a good idea. Even if Tohsaka's in London for the week, Archer can survive without her being near and he watches the city for her while she's gone.
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Shinji was rider's master so Sakura was not involved in the war itself, post war however it was revealed that rider's true master was Sakura. Ilya informed shirou and the rest about Sakura and Rin. Contacting Archer is a matter of finding him. Shirou however would prefer to avoid Lancer. Ilya is out front of the house when checking back
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Ask Ilya if she knows where Taiga has gone. Also, ask her what she knows about Sakura's past and her adoptive family.
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Ilya shakes her head and then whispers to shirou that talking about Sakura while she's around is a bad idea
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What do you know about Sakura's past and adoptive family? Also, when you get a chance, talk to Ilya alone about Sakura's past.