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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 11:08:26 PM »
the demons aren't really fighters

Yes, and?

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: May 03, 2013, 11:08:12 PM »
Hmm, OK, let me think a bit about that.

What sort of stuff are you looking for here? I assume you don't want hardcore torture scenes....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 10:51:21 PM »
rider may have told rin but that doesn't mean sakura knows that.

No, but that then means that Sakura still gets excluded from everything, only she doesn't know that they know the truth.

Also, like I said, I don't think Rider would do that. She's too loyal to Sakura, and wouldn't want to risk revealing her true master to a potential enemy in case that said enemy went after her.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 10:49:59 PM »
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What do you mean "makes fun of the usual stuff"?

harem cliches and the like.

Please explain more....

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You need to explain this in more detail, I don't remember even what the "demon king" thing is....

shinji goes to hell, becomes the king of demons. the sequel deals with how a group of the fate characters deal with him after that point.

Well, assuming that is lemon, it does sound interesting. Demons don't tend to be overly bothered by stuff like "consent", and are rather fond of torture, BDSM etc....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 10:41:36 PM »
the gag harem is a lemon which makes fun of the usual stuff and obvious has sex scenes with all the applicable characters shirou and archer certainly, not sure if Satoshi would be included (shiki is although he's with kohaku only)

What do you mean "makes fun of the usual stuff"?

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and the sequel deals with the actions of shinji once he becomes the demon king.

You need to explain this in more detail, I don't remember even what the "demon king" thing is....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 10:41:01 PM »
i would expect her to spill everything she knows once freed from shinji.

Really? I can't see her wanting to give up Sakura's secret if Sakura herself does not wish to.

Also, if she told them that Sakura was a master, then Sakura has little reason not to regain control of Rider. She has nothing to hide any more, so why not get involved directly?

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 10:20:45 PM »
I suspect different with Rider's disposition

What?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:52:22 PM »
i guess? neither is really planned that in that way or another content wise.

What?

And, OK, you need to explain the settings more before I can help write anything for them.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:51:54 PM »
I doubt they would succeed in keeping it a secret from her and i imagine archer giving rin a smack if she tried.

Well, obviously they won't succeed, because she already knows about it. But, at the same time, she doesn't want them to know she knows about it (because it would imply she was a master), and they don't want her to know. So, the charade is likely to continue reasonably well, I suspect.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:33:37 PM »
in the violence of the rest of the story but she's not saber or archer, sakura 's not built for fighting like that.

Well, no, of course she's not a direct fighter (although she isn't completely incapable of it), but that doesn't mean she can't help with planning etc. Without a servant, my suspicion is that Rin and Shirou would keep her as far out of the way as possible, to ensure she wouldn't be a target and to keep the war secret from her.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:32:09 PM »
fair enough. although I said sequel to the demon king story which is different.

Well, yes, true, but it still sounds more liable to be BDSMy than "gag harem" does....

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checks and balances are what it needs true, but before we go further I'd like to hear Alice's impressions first, does it some like a good idea Alice?

Yeah, fair enough. We certainly need more than just our opinions before accepting it.

I do think it would be a good idea for you to post some of the details you came up with over Skype, though, so people can judge the idea better.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:25:31 PM »
you sure you don't have that reversed?

Well, "demon king" implies likely BDSM, whereas "gag harem" doesn't....

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:24:49 PM »
it'll be fine, as for other stuff you can pitch it here, ideas, scenes whatever.

Yeah, I know, I already pitched a couple of ideas. It's difficult for me to come up with stuff that fits the theme, though, since my tendancies are towards settings that start out rather dark (to allow for BDSM stuff) and then get resolved later after lots of torture scenes....

It's also difficult to come up with scenes out of nowhere, I tend to need a setting to get my mind going on them.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« on: May 03, 2013, 09:23:33 PM »
what i'm suggesting is a clutch moment in a big fight like that and yes Sakura won't be involved much in the violence but that doesn't mean zero involvement, I think it fits her character and is believable character development.

Well, it's a big involvement in the final fight, yes, but it means she has little involvement in the rest of the story. It is also difficult for Kotomine to hold onto Rider for any length of time without Sakura taking her back.

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