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Doujin Projects / Re: Dark Side of the Moon, a collaborative story project (original fiction version)

« on: May 03, 2013, 09:05:10 PM »

Well, the way you described it made it sound like it would be a horrible dystopia. A world run by businesses doesn't sound like somewhere I'd want to live, in general. You have, however, explained ways to avoid this over Skype, so as long as those are in place I think the world could at least be tolerable enough that it wouldn't require a revolution (I wouldn't necessarily like it, but I don't like the modern world either, and that doesn't mean I expect every story about it to involve an anarchist uprising and Bush's head ending up on a pike...).

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: May 03, 2013, 09:03:10 PM »

after berserker is dead is really the mid point

Well, what you're suggesting is basically the end of the Fate route, only with Sakura replacing Rin. Ilya getting stolen means they need to get her back now (before Gil kills her), and that means they have to defeat Gil there and then. Although, I guess having Rider suddenly turn on them could change that, particularly if Sakura is smart about it....

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.

« on: May 03, 2013, 08:57:29 PM »

well I think rider and sakura work, lil samey but it'll work. toshi i figured would deal with the other girls.

Well, yeah, the sameiness is what worries me. I just don't know if anyone else is viable, though.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: May 03, 2013, 08:57:02 PM »

gil steals ilya and knocks her out and at the same time rin gets jumped by kirei

Well, that could work. It does sound like it would be rather late in the story, though, and I'd like Sakura to get involved a bit earlier than that, ideally.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: May 03, 2013, 08:56:37 PM »

fair enough, I do have a set up finalized for a few ideas including a gag harem thing and a sequel to as heretofore unwritten demon king shinji fic both having lemon

Hmm, well, the second one sounds interesting. The first one I dunno, it's possibly interesting, it depends on the content and set-up.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: May 03, 2013, 03:20:19 AM »

have sakura asleep or knocked out

Well, it's possible, although we have to work out how that would happen, particularly if she found out that Rin had obtained and then lost the book....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: May 03, 2013, 03:19:39 AM »

really you're going there?

No, I was just giving an example of how the world does affect the porn content.

Obviously this isn't going to be set-up like that, but the way it is set up will affect the likelihood of certain elements.

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Doujin Projects / Re: Dark Side of the Moon, a collaborative story project (original fiction version)

« on: May 02, 2013, 11:44:37 PM »

I see....

Well, anti-authoritarian stuff is the sort of thing I tend to like, and I especially hate stories that make authority look like a generally good thing which is rarely or ever abused, and those in power are magically wonderful despite having no restraints on their power. You only have to look at every internet forum ever and every dictatorship ever to see that unrestricted authority is almost always abused, especially in the long term. Even if you somehow get a genuinely good leader, their successors are almost always corrupt.

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Doujin Projects / Re: Dark Side of the Moon, a collaborative story project (original fiction version)

« on: May 02, 2013, 10:47:13 PM »

Why is it a "bad pitch"?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: May 02, 2013, 10:46:40 PM »

That's not really true. For example, a world inhabited by evil sadists and people who they hunt, capture and torture for sport is likely to have quite a lot of BDSM, rape and torture scenes....

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Doujin Projects / Re: Dark Side of the Moon, a collaborative story project (original fiction version)

« on: May 02, 2013, 10:32:45 PM »

I don't see how "technocracy" means "rule by the rich"

technology is the new currency so to speak, well commodity. he who has the tech has the power

Yeah, that's not what "technocracy" means, a technocracy is a society ruled by scientists for the purpose of doing science. This sounds just like modern society, only even worse.

Also, the "dwarves" and "elves" thing is kind-of cheating.

it's a blend of scifi urban and fantasy cheating implies there are rules.

Well, I mean "cheating" in the sense that they're not really dwarves or elves, and have little in common with them aside from the name and some very superficial traits.

Also, we need to work out what the plot would be. The society sounds to me like a horrible dystopia, so I think it needs overthrowing....

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General Discussion / Re: Fate/Extra CCC

« on: May 02, 2013, 10:11:03 PM »

Well, that BB stuff does seem rather amusing, although IIRC she does have a nastier side to her (as demonstrated by the torture chambers where she rips out the circuits of masters...).

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Doujin Projects / Re: Dark Side of the Moon, a collaborative story project (original fiction version)

« on: May 02, 2013, 10:10:01 PM »

Well, it doesn't sound like a bad idea in concept, although I don't see how "technocracy" means "rule by the rich" or "rule by capitalists". What you're suggesting sounds more like a ultra-capitalist dystopia....

Also, the "dwarves" and "elves" thing is kind-of cheating.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: May 02, 2013, 09:00:03 PM »

no that's plot building, not world building.

What?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: May 02, 2013, 07:52:07 PM »

Well, it affects what sort of lemon content is likely to be possible. And, like I said, I know that, if you're left to design the sexual content entirely on your own, you will exclude elements I like almost entirely.