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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.

« on: April 30, 2013, 11:58:24 PM »

and before attempting to writing lemon stuff i wasn't any good at it.

Well, yes, but there is a difference between learning to write and coming up with ideas that aren't natural. Coming up with an idea is a much more innate process that is difficult to control. The idea just happens.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 11:57:48 PM »

Not sure, really. What is there to do?

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 11:57:16 PM »

the life draning think, as i said.

Ah, OK.

Well, then, what are you asking for here? Are you asking me to give ideas for the nature of the torture etc.? That's what it sounded like from "figure out the scene as you see fit".

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 10:33:47 PM »

just ignore it.

Ignore what?

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 10:14:22 PM »

like i said whatever, lets move on

Yeah, OK.

I guess we can resolve this later, when we have a clearer idea of the plot.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 10:05:28 PM »

just pointing it out,frankly you already set the concept up, i'm not worried about the mechanics atm, you don't need to worry about it, just figure out the scene as you see fit

What do you mean by that?

The basic concept of what I want for the scene is simple, Caster captures Sakura and tortures her for a few weeks, in a sexy manner, before Shirou rescues her. I don't know what motivation she'd have for doing that, though, aside from it turning her on (she's a sadist, and I definitely intend for her to gain sexual excitement from torturing Sakura, and to use her as a sex slave).

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 09:39:14 PM »

generally having your life force drained hurts period

Yes, of course, but that's not really the point. Sakura sitting in a cage screaming because she's being drained of her life force is hardly erotic, or particularly BDSMy....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 09:35:05 PM »

i think the master servant think is a relationship crutch, I mean seriously it makes their relationship less textbook, still like i said fine, give her rider back, it'll be kinda dull imo but whatever.

I understand that, the problem is that it's a Grail War, if you don't have a servant you cannot do very much.

If you can find a satisfactory solution to that that also addresses my other issues (specifically, Rider's feelings for Sakura not just being ignored or eliminated, as well as the practical issues with finding someone else as a master that isn't going to just look contrived), I would be OK with it, but right now you're not coming up with any useful suggestions.

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 04:00:02 AM »

Perhaps, but I really do not like your idea, at least as you're selling it right now. I do not like the idea of Rider having little connection to Sakura, and I don't like the idea of Sakura not being a master.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:53:03 AM »

Well, yes, but I'm not very good at thinking of such things....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:52:45 AM »

it's magic? i dunno, magic is bizarre

Well, possibly. I guess it could be some weird thing where making her suffer more causes her life force to be drained....

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:52:18 AM »

still it's more then you have at the moment. i'm honestly up for better ideas but unless you throw more out here i got none

The problem is that your idea doesn't work either. I actually do not think it is at all better than what I've got, not least because it heavily limits Sakura's involvement in the story.

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Lantz's fics / Re: of flesh and fantasy poll and discussion.

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:45:19 AM »

Well, perhaps, but when it comes to porn I do like BDSM stuff....

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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:44:54 AM »

i imagine draining her life force or such.

Yeah, but how does that fit with torturing her?

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Lantz's fics / Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

« on: April 30, 2013, 03:44:34 AM »

i won't be writing her as such, point is we need something for rider beyond sakura, we have something for saber and archer already.

Well, perhaps, but splitting her off from Sakura won't achieve that. She won't magically forget all about her....