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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: May 01, 2014, 12:18:07 AM »

NEXT TIME, ON SATOSHIBALL Z.

SATOSHI CHECKS UP ON HIS HAREM MATES AND BEGINS FORMULATING ON HIS PLANS ON HOW TO MANAGE HIS HAREM LIFE.

SHIROU'S NEED TO BE THE MAIN PROTAGONIST HAS ALSO BEGUN TO THREATEN SATOSHI'S POSITION AS THE ALPHA MALE. WILL SATOSHI DO SOMETHING TO PROVE HIS DOMINANCE OVER WOMEN?

ALREADY, MANY OF THE OTHERS TRAPPED ARE NOW RUSHING FOR THE KITCHEN, POTENTIALLY RUINING SATOSHI'S CHANCES OF SHOWING OFF HIS EXTREME COOKING SKILLS INHERITED OVER MILLIONS OF YEARS OF TRAINING AND BEING SHIROU'S SON.

WILL SATOSHI TRULY BE PREPARED TO HANDLE ALL OF THESE SITUATIONS AFTER LOSING HEAT IN HIS CHEST?

YES BECAUSE SATOSHI IS INVINCIBLE, BUT SEE IT FOR YOURSELF IN SATOSHI BALL Z!!!!

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 11:58:07 PM »

Kaiza voted #2. Too bad, I wanted to see Satoshi sit down.

And recover.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 05:26:00 AM »

Fine. I'll be waiting for your fic then Lantz.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 03:11:33 AM »

Which is why I his RM doesn't make it fair. Saying that he wants a fair fight, but being in control of the rules is the exact opposite of a fair fight.

While allowing the opponent to make their own rules would make it equal, it wouldn't matter because Satoshi has Avalon to make that "equalization" null. Fact is, Satoshi always has the advantage because his opponents will not be able to even hurt him, let alone kill him. In the end, the RM is just a way for Satoshi to gain reality warping powers on top of his reality warping powers, dragon powers and special swords.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 02:36:21 AM »

He believes in fair competition, yet Satoshi sets up any five rules he wants. If you wanted his RM to make a fair fight, give some actual penalties for his RM.

Besides, it doesn't matter about the RM, since he can never have a fair fight. Avalon makes him invincible, hence he will always have the advantage.

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Fanfiction / Re: Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

« on: April 30, 2014, 02:21:54 AM »

That Satoshi apparently respects Gil by not checking up on him? That doing so would be like calling Gil a pussy? If its an attack that almost downs the both of them, they shouldn't be thinking about things like that. Gil would also be very concerned about the situation as this is something that he not only didn't expect, but has no answer for.

Lantz, that isn't the big issue here. One of the issues with this fic so far is that nobody but the "bad guys" have said ANYTHING in this fic, with only Satoshi's monologues being the closest to hearing anybody else's voice. You gotta start having some conversations in this fic, and actually involve everybody. I know that thats not easy to do, but you put in all those characters; they need to act or they're just cardboard cut outs.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 02:16:32 AM »

Does the damage just happen, or is there some special effects that occur? Also, what do you mean by "Satoshi doesn't believe in killing so it will never kill a rule breaker"? If Satoshi sets the rules for no violence and he breaks that rule, shouldn't he be going through that penalty? Or are you saying he won't do that act?

Anyways, it doesn't matter. Satoshi can break his own rules and be fine because of Avalon.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 30, 2014, 12:36:49 AM »

Nothing has been confirmed as to what Satoshi has as of yet. As for his RM, intangible force strikes the offending party with feedback relative to their offense.

I'm unsure what you mean by this. If they only break the rules a little bit they only get hit a little bit? Does it constantly attack them?

Imagination beams? In the shape of swords maybe? The RM doesn't even give us any idea of what it looks like, just how Satoshi has absolute dominance over whoever he fights against.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 29, 2014, 04:10:15 PM »

Basically Edward Cullen.

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Fanfiction / Re: Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

« on: April 29, 2014, 04:09:48 PM »

Can you show me that his ego is like that? Saying that helping him would make him look like a pussy sounds stupid. Satoshi sounds kind of like a jerk if he thinks that helping Gil would make him look like that.

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Fanfiction / Re: Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

« on: April 29, 2014, 05:58:43 AM »

And having people not give a shit about me is respect to me? Gil also likes manners and humbleness from people. Saying you've got Satoshi going "you're the king of heroes, ur fine" would probably piss him off.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 29, 2014, 05:56:37 AM »

Because Shirou calls his son an old fart.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 29, 2014, 05:02:16 AM »

Has Lantz actually decided what to do for his fic yet? I am serious about sitting down and recovering.

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 29, 2014, 04:47:38 AM »

I totally am choosing. I chose number 1, which is sitting and recovering.

Names is just making that decision more.... Creative.

Besides, Lantz is the one that actually made that choice, so there. Honestly, I just wanted to see where that kind of choice could go, but Names totally made it awesome. LETS HEAR WHERE THIS DECISION IS GOING, IS SATOSHI GOING TO CHALLENGE THE TOILET GODS OR NOT!??!?!

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Lantz's fics / Re: Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

« on: April 29, 2014, 02:41:29 AM »

He can do all that dumping by sitting down.

And recovering.