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Fanfiction / Re: Crossover ideas thread
« on: November 26, 2013, 06:58:37 AM »
Thanks for the edit suggestion Cherry Lover! I didn't know I could do that. I'm kinda new here and I don't go on forums much anyway.
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It doesn't. Having paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences makes it really difficult to read. Breaking it down into more paragraphs is fine, but breaking in the middle of a sentence makes it hard to understand.Ah, okay. Do you want me to repost them with normal formatting? As to the background, I was mostly referring to the white-ish splotches behind the white font making it a little harder for me to read.
I would say that HF Shirou's attitude is more "I will save everyone, but especially Sakura", actually. Once he decides to protect her, he doesn't stop trying to protect innocents from the shadow, and he doesn't stop getting upset at people dying.That's actually what I meant to say. I'm not sure why I said what I did, but this is from the original post: "Snow is the determined hero who wants to save everybody but mostly Serah, his love." I was kind of in a rush this morning.
Hmm, is there a reason your post is spaced like that?
As for the ideas, I don't know much about what they're crossing-over with, but if you're looking at HF Shirou for the first one I'm not sure he would easily fall for someone else. I'm not sure how exactly you're intending this to work, though.
the final fantasy 13 crossover needs to be scrapped completely. FF13 has a god awful story and no amount of crossovers can ever fix the problems inherent in the plot and characters. It's best not to dirty your hands attempting to crossover the nasuverse with final fantasy, from 7 to13 (9 and 11 excluded for obvious reasons) the stories and characters have been heavily flawed at best.