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Lantz's fics / Re: A Thousand Words (possible lemon)
« on: August 20, 2018, 09:38:35 PM »
Still working on this project, there'll be a new thread for newer images up soon.
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General Discussion / Re: Fate / Grand Order
« on: August 20, 2018, 06:23:45 PM »
In regards to the game and story itself, anyone else think it's bullshit that Galahad has a magic shield? Dude didn't defend for shit as i recall.
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General Discussion / Re: Fate / Grand Order
« on: August 19, 2018, 06:13:33 AM »
That's only really a point against the mobile game model. Ultimately it's not responsible for any of the actual problems or ridiculous choices made in Service of any of the mentioned topics. Other games have the same model with a far less bullshit gatcha for example.
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General Discussion / Re: Fate / Grand Order
« on: August 18, 2018, 07:55:35 PM »
Do you mean story, gameplay or the gatcha? Or do you mean the metagame bs that makes 90% of the fans put down 80% of the servants because they aren't someone else? Each of those is a legitimate topic of discussion worth it's own thread.
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General Discussion / Re: Fate/Extella (PS Vita, PS4)
« on: January 26, 2017, 04:25:51 PM »
Having played the game through the story and several (not quite all) of the side stories I can say she's an active part of that part of the game. She's the last unlockable character, interestingly all the world's evil exists in the moon cell.
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General Discussion / Re: Fate/Extella (PS Vita, PS4)
« on: December 02, 2016, 09:55:36 AM »
Did I miss something or is Saber her own faction? Unless I missed the mark completely this is a musou game, Saber being on her own makes her Lu Bu, ironic considering that, if I recall correctly, Lu Bu is present in Extra and this new game itself.
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Type Moon Polls / Re: Best Girl
« on: January 15, 2016, 05:08:49 AM »
I thought people were referring to her as nurse Sakura.
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Type Moon Polls / Re: Most Shit FSN Servant
« on: January 15, 2016, 05:07:45 AM »
Which false assassin? There's more than one due to anyone not being Hassan is considered false.
also is the king supposed to be Gilgamesh?
also is the king supposed to be Gilgamesh?
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Type Moon Polls / Re: Best Girl
« on: January 15, 2016, 05:04:58 AM »
I object to this because this is clearly thought control. Also who dafaq is Sakurider? Never heard that term used to describe a character.
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General Discussion / Re: Hair colours
« on: August 22, 2015, 11:18:02 PM »
Well actually I was thinking of Ritsuko's mother and the contrasting fact that Kaworu and Rei are both supposed to be albino but Rei has colour in her hair while Kaworu doesn't. Asuka is a non starter cause she's German / Japanese.
Regardless my greater point stands, even if it was artistic expression representing naturally occurring colours then, it sure isn't now. Purple hair is definitely supposed to be purple in modern anime.
Regardless my greater point stands, even if it was artistic expression representing naturally occurring colours then, it sure isn't now. Purple hair is definitely supposed to be purple in modern anime.
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General Discussion / Re: Hair colours
« on: August 18, 2015, 04:30:46 PM »
I think that was, at one point true, however it's certainly no longer the case for current anime.
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General Discussion / Re: Hair colours
« on: July 24, 2015, 07:24:23 PM »
It's an interesting thought but I think the major reason for a lack of discussion is that anime in general doesn't even bring up hair colour as a thing 99% of the time period. Not unless there's a specific artistic reason for it (see raven haired vampires and shit) or a story reason like in bleach (if I recall correctly Ichigo's hair is specifically blonde naturally for some reason) Ultimately hair colour means less than zero, look at evangelion.
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Lantz's fics / Re: Shattered heroics new world
« on: July 24, 2015, 07:17:17 PM »
It's not dead, been busy/sick rl plus I have been writing for fics apart from this one. Life runs away sometimes
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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: May 14, 2015, 05:08:46 AM »
The entry form such as it is
Story Title: Captive Blossom
Genre: Lemon
Nasuverse works: FSN
Route: Diverges from canon pre-VN
the prizes are up to the author to reveal information about
Story Title: Captive Blossom
Genre: Lemon
Nasuverse works: FSN
Route: Diverges from canon pre-VN
the prizes are up to the author to reveal information about
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Lantz's fics / Re: Lantz's Fanfiction Contest
« on: May 14, 2015, 05:04:00 AM »
Story Title: Captive blossom
Readability (18 of 20)
Genre goal (30 of 40)
Characterization (75 of 100)
Community (30 of 75)
Creativity (45 of 50)
Uniqueness (25 of 50)
Appeal (2 of 5)
Fun factor (10 of 30)
With only Mike's single entry (sadly) the contest comes to a close.
ultimately the scores don't matter, fandom and fan fiction is about having fun with something you like.
that said as judge I'm going to explain my thoughts on the work and Mike, as author can feel free to post said work if he chooses.
readability: There are some awkward sentences but it is mostly readable on a technical level.
Genre Goal: As porn it works for what it is but I find it largely unsustainable outside of that.
Characterization: Sakura and Rider are a bit out of sorts here, granted it's porn but something seems very off about their chemistry.
Community: Granted Satoshi as a Berserker has no written read template but he was fairly mischaracterized here. He's flat and formal with his speech, his logic is too cold when it should be filled with nonsensical and hilarious leaps and emotionally charged and he refers to characters incorrectly, Ilya and Shirou mostly. Further while he is in the strictest sense bound to obey his master and would as a result (most unfortunately) rape Sakura in this context if ordered to. His mind would alter his speech to reflect a more positive situation as a result, as much for his own remaining sanity as for Sakura's well being. He's not evil after all.
creativity: I don't think Bell can be used like that to bind people (much less a Dragon) it's still a good idea, although throwing out the bad guy here is what marked it down
uniqueness: I can say that I've never seen something quite like this, the clichés are all that keep it from being better.
appeal: Not my cup of tea, sorry
Fun factor: it was rather dull in this respect, I just couldn't get into it.
Readability (18 of 20)
Genre goal (30 of 40)
Characterization (75 of 100)
Community (30 of 75)
Creativity (45 of 50)
Uniqueness (25 of 50)
Appeal (2 of 5)
Fun factor (10 of 30)
With only Mike's single entry (sadly) the contest comes to a close.
ultimately the scores don't matter, fandom and fan fiction is about having fun with something you like.
that said as judge I'm going to explain my thoughts on the work and Mike, as author can feel free to post said work if he chooses.
readability: There are some awkward sentences but it is mostly readable on a technical level.
Genre Goal: As porn it works for what it is but I find it largely unsustainable outside of that.
Characterization: Sakura and Rider are a bit out of sorts here, granted it's porn but something seems very off about their chemistry.
Community: Granted Satoshi as a Berserker has no written read template but he was fairly mischaracterized here. He's flat and formal with his speech, his logic is too cold when it should be filled with nonsensical and hilarious leaps and emotionally charged and he refers to characters incorrectly, Ilya and Shirou mostly. Further while he is in the strictest sense bound to obey his master and would as a result (most unfortunately) rape Sakura in this context if ordered to. His mind would alter his speech to reflect a more positive situation as a result, as much for his own remaining sanity as for Sakura's well being. He's not evil after all.
creativity: I don't think Bell can be used like that to bind people (much less a Dragon) it's still a good idea, although throwing out the bad guy here is what marked it down
uniqueness: I can say that I've never seen something quite like this, the clichés are all that keep it from being better.
appeal: Not my cup of tea, sorry
Fun factor: it was rather dull in this respect, I just couldn't get into it.