Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

[qwertyfatcat]

The plot of that story is simple, but the means to getting there are a bit much. Mostly, I just can't comprehend the existence of Hair powers Harry.

Hair power Harry... Lol.

[Xamusel]

Hrm... I see what you mean.

Well, I do plan on making things less complicated, so to speak.

[qwertyfatcat]

I pray for your success.

I mean for your fic, and not the popularity of FG Harry. FG Harry crossed another line for me when Harry killed Gilgamesh with some variant of all the world's evil.

[Xamusel]

*shudders* I don't want to think of Gilgamesh dying by Harry varying Angra Mainyu on him.

Anyway, yeah, I understand what you mean.

Now... back on topic?

[Cherry Lover]

Isn't that what happens to him in HF, though...?

[Xamusel]

...it took me a bit to realize you meant Gilgamesh.

Actually, now that I think about it, possibly (given what Sakura was at the time).

[Cherry Lover]

Well, Sakura certainly ate him, and AM was definitely involved in her doing so.

[qwertyfatcat]

Sakura was tied to the Grail system which has precedence over Gil's existence.

I think its more like the shadow was the system, and Gil couldn't do much against it because he was a part of it.

Harry used All the World's Evil, not the grail.

If he did use the grail, he's worse then I thought.

[Xamusel]

...yeah, no.

Harry is a separate Grail System, in-story (he's aligned to the 3rd more than the 2nd).

Anyway, to remove much of the BS that Fate's Gamble!Harry Potter has, I intend to have him be kept under Zouken's thumb (because he and Hermione managed to keep Sakura away from the Matou, or so he reasoned to himself), so a lot of Harry's abilities will need to be toned down because of that.

[qwertyfatcat]

Sorry if I was wrong about that part, but Harry is another grail system?!?! What?! More to the 3rd than the 2nd?! You can be aligned to 2?!?!?!

Could you give him a personality that gave "some" shit about other people? I don't really keep up that much with FGarry.

[RamKingSpaceSlamKatsulam]

literally wtf

[Xamusel]

Yeah, I planned on actually giving him a personality that cared for others (to an extent), especially since he'd be stuck in that world while Hermione is suffering from Zouken's grasp (how I intended for Harry to be kept under Zouken's thumb).

Anyway, yeah, working on it right now... and aiming to keep it reasonable.

[qwertyfatcat]

good luck on that xamusel. Really.

FG Harry is just....... If I were to describe him.....

He could make his own list of powers that could make about 3 characters overpowered.

[Xamusel]

I don't blame you for thinking that. Honest.

I actually intend to limit him overall (if possible).

[qwertyfatcat]

I want to know more about FG Harry to know more about your fic Xamusel honest.

But that's FGarry.........

Its existence frightens me.