That Satoshi apparently respects Gil by not checking up on him? That doing so would be like calling Gil a pussy? If its an attack that almost downs the both of them, they shouldn't be thinking about things like that. Gil would also be very concerned about the situation as this is something that he not only didn't expect, but has no answer for.
Lantz, that isn't the big issue here. One of the issues with this fic so far is that nobody but the "bad guys" have said ANYTHING in this fic, with only Satoshi's monologues being the closest to hearing anybody else's voice. You gotta start having some conversations in this fic, and actually involve everybody. I know that thats not easy to do, but you put in all those characters; they need to act or they're just cardboard cut outs.