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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #345 on: May 21, 2013, 02:44:49 AM »
Well rider is under Shinji and then kirei, not much to develop, no idea what you mean about her feelings disappearing.

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #346 on: May 21, 2013, 03:06:04 AM »
Well rider is under Shinji and then kirei, not much to develop

I thought she was under Rin for at least some proportion of the story. There's scope for development there, at least.

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no idea what you mean about her feelings disappearing.

Well, her coming to care less about Sakura.

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #347 on: May 21, 2013, 03:18:05 AM »
True enough about rin but I can't see any character development that is relevant to rider herself

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« Reply #348 on: May 21, 2013, 03:21:52 AM »
True enough about rin but I can't see any character development that is relevant to rider herself

Hmm, OK.

Well, I can live with that, although I would actually like her to be more than just Sakura's protector....

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #349 on: May 21, 2013, 03:28:13 AM »
I want rider to be more than her protector more than you

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« Reply #350 on: May 21, 2013, 03:35:29 AM »
I want rider to be more than her protector more than you

Yeah, I know you do....

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #351 on: May 21, 2013, 03:38:48 AM »
Any way with rider settled let's move on to another character

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #352 on: May 21, 2013, 01:47:15 PM »
Hmm, well, OK, I guess Shirou or Rin makes sense next, not sure which. I'm going to say Rin.

For her, I would like development such that she becomes more in touch with her human side, and in particular for her to reconcile her feelings for Sakura and openly accept her as her little sister. Fighting-wise I'm not sure there is much to develop, at least at this stage. She's already pretty competent, and I don't think we should start throwing the Jewelled Sword in here.

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #353 on: May 21, 2013, 07:03:23 PM »
Humanizing Rin is okay to an extent but we can't go to far as for the next character let's discuss ilya

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« Reply #354 on: May 21, 2013, 07:22:47 PM »
Humanizing Rin is okay to an extent but we can't go to far

Well, what do you mean by "too far"?

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as for the next character let's discuss ilya

Hmm, well, there I think you're probably better-placed than I am to start it off....

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #355 on: May 22, 2013, 09:02:09 PM »
You can't change her completely, as for. Ilya I'd like her to live obviously, I'd prefer she grew up physically but logically time is too short for that

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« Reply #356 on: May 22, 2013, 09:10:27 PM »
You can't change her completely

No, of course not, but you don't have to, because she is a fundamentally kind person.

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as for. Ilya I'd like her to live obviously, I'd prefer she grew up physically but logically time is too short for that

Well, yeah, that makes sense. That is hardly much in the way of character development, though....

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #357 on: May 22, 2013, 09:32:15 PM »
Well her development in fate is good enough for me anyway

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« Reply #358 on: May 22, 2013, 09:41:11 PM »
Well her development in fate is good enough for me anyway

Hmm, OK.

Well, I'm not overly bothered and I'm not sure what sort of development beyond that she can get in this amount of time, so that's fine.

Shirou, then?

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Re: The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)
« Reply #359 on: May 23, 2013, 08:42:00 PM »
yeah, sure, mainly i'd like shirou to get the ubw treatment here.