The Round Table (A collaborative fiction thread)

[lantzblades]

Well rider is under Shinji and then kirei, not much to develop, no idea what you mean about her feelings disappearing.

[Cherry Lover]

Well rider is under Shinji and then kirei, not much to develop

I thought she was under Rin for at least some proportion of the story. There's scope for development there, at least.

no idea what you mean about her feelings disappearing.

Well, her coming to care less about Sakura.

[lantzblades]

True enough about rin but I can't see any character development that is relevant to rider herself

[Cherry Lover]

True enough about rin but I can't see any character development that is relevant to rider herself

Hmm, OK.

Well, I can live with that, although I would actually like her to be more than just Sakura's protector....

[lantzblades]

I want rider to be more than her protector more than you

[Cherry Lover]

I want rider to be more than her protector more than you

Yeah, I know you do....

[lantzblades]

Any way with rider settled let's move on to another character

[Cherry Lover]

Hmm, well, OK, I guess Shirou or Rin makes sense next, not sure which. I'm going to say Rin.

For her, I would like development such that she becomes more in touch with her human side, and in particular for her to reconcile her feelings for Sakura and openly accept her as her little sister. Fighting-wise I'm not sure there is much to develop, at least at this stage. She's already pretty competent, and I don't think we should start throwing the Jewelled Sword in here.

[lantzblades]

Humanizing Rin is okay to an extent but we can't go to far as for the next character let's discuss ilya

[Cherry Lover]

Humanizing Rin is okay to an extent but we can't go to far

Well, what do you mean by "too far"?

as for the next character let's discuss ilya

Hmm, well, there I think you're probably better-placed than I am to start it off....

[lantzblades]

You can't change her completely, as for. Ilya I'd like her to live obviously, I'd prefer she grew up physically but logically time is too short for that

[Cherry Lover]

You can't change her completely

No, of course not, but you don't have to, because she is a fundamentally kind person.

as for. Ilya I'd like her to live obviously, I'd prefer she grew up physically but logically time is too short for that

Well, yeah, that makes sense. That is hardly much in the way of character development, though....

[lantzblades]

Well her development in fate is good enough for me anyway

[Cherry Lover]

Well her development in fate is good enough for me anyway

Hmm, OK.

Well, I'm not overly bothered and I'm not sure what sort of development beyond that she can get in this amount of time, so that's fine.

Shirou, then?

[lantzblades]

yeah, sure, mainly i'd like shirou to get the ubw treatment here.