Fate's Mirror: Fortune and Favour (interactive fiction, possible lemon)

[Cherry Lover]

There are stories in which that works well, yes (and Lantz has done such before), but the mechanics of this story means that it won't work well here.

[Gray]

But it wouldhave been so much fun, would have given the audience a greater sense of participation and challenged the author in new and interesting ways. What's not to like?

[lantzblades]

In Addition adding kill yourself as an option is rude at best Gray.

[Gray]

I wasn't saying it to you Lantz.
I was saying it to your character.
It would have been the random funny shit that this stuff runs on. Surpise Seppuku or however it's spelt.

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

'sides he's immortal, got nothing to lose

[lantzblades]

Suicide isn't funny Gray

[Gray]

Anything is funny in a comedy. Have you seen how many times rape has been played for black comedy?
Or great levels of injury?
Shaudenfreude is a thing.

[lantzblades]

This work isn't a black comedy  Gray, in the future don't suggest such. If you want free form wait for the quest series.

[YOLF]

3) Apologize and leave quietly.

[qwertyfatcat]

Wow. Because the first thing we gotta have for the beginning of the fic is the clichéd bath scene with many women.

You're pulling that out this early Lantz?

[Cherry Lover]

3) Apologize and leave quietly.

[lantzblades]

Vote closed, winner three

[lantzblades]

Formally closed due to lack of player interest