This work is fucking utter trash. The author has no concept of story structure, and creates threads about his fic when there are already such threads made. From the beginning, the main character comes off as an unlikeable motherfucker (literally if some of Lantz's other works are to be considered canon) who has the dumbest fucking comments I've ever read on situations, and seems to be even more oblivious than Shirou without making a conscious effort on that front, like Shirou did. He seems to view being fed human organs of his aunt and or cousin (Oh, right, the author makes the same fucking mistake of many a bad fanfiction writer in naming his characters the same as actual canon characters, when they're the sons/daughters of such. And those characters are both A), still alive, and B) from a culture that doesn't let that shit fly) as an only minorly unpleasant experience. So he's a fucking psychopath who cares nothing for others too.
THis thing should be thrown in the trash, have gas thrown over it, and lit on fire.
Also, there's already a thread for this fic up so fucking delete this thread mods, because Lantz is just cluttering up the forum's again.
