God bless me, the Co-GM. I am now wondering how to usurp Mike and obtain ALL of the power of the forum.
Okay, first off, you know how when you get warnings they're private until you get your last one and it's public; This is that. Quite a shame that my first post as Co-GM needs to be this one, but were it not for the circumstances at present I would not have my new role.
Due to a variety of factors and the "last chance" given and all, I'd like to point out Lantzblades's last post in the RP proper, and its violation of rule 6: Though shalt not write poorly to an extreme.
Sakura smiled as she appeared in the dark city. "Satoshi I need you to scout out the area while I clean out our new residence" she said pointing to an abandoned factory near their arrival point.
Satoshi grunted and leapt onto a nearby rooftop lamenting his mistakes in their battle.
His features had become pale and his eyes gold. ' in the future, don't worry about breaking bones' he thought finding the nearby area seemingly deserted.
Sakura, on the other hand was greeted with the sounds of heavy dance music and the feeling of immediate violence. Without hesitation the shadow power swallowed the mass group of what Sakura realized were vampires without allowing them to scream.
"Good, nice and clean" she chuckled.
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Sakura Tohsaka landed on a rooftop in the west end on the city. "Note to self, carry landing braces" she muttered noticing her near appearance in mid air.
Switching on her recorder Sakura began her log " Entry one, gear is mostly gone, need replacements, cityscape seems charged with prana, will make further entries when my gear is back" she said switching the recorder off.
Looking around she found the roof access and began attempting to unlock it to avoid using magic as much as possible.
Take a look at this punctuation, if you'd please, and no, I am not kidding. This punctuation is horrendous and makes my heart bleed out. Where are the commas? I count three. More than thrice that would be required. Even reading this post made me feel out of breath and wheezy!
Just because you are posting by phone, Lantz, you are not given a lower standard over everyone else.
You are lucky about one thing I will respect that Elf has asked me: As GM, she gave you a last chance you have squandered, however she asked that as Co-GM I do the same that she did. So, there it is. You are not kicked.
But I am by far, leagues even, a stricter judge than Elf ever was. A single punctuation error is not enough, nor is one or two for grammar, but another post, nay, third a post like this one will be.
You are honestly lucky to have this, and honestly unlucky to have me. Phone or not, write like you mean it, or don't bother.
As for everyone else, no fucking drama. Don't like someone's sheet because it's shit or makes no sense? Tell me to look at it. Think their post is fucking dumb? Tell me to look at it. Everyone who engages in an (unhealthy) argument will receive a warning from me both as a mod and a Co-GM. Cause too much shit and you're out, no matter who you are. We don't need another five pages of assorted shit about one subject.
Even me. If I catch myself making a drunk RP post, I am kicking myself out.
Keep calm and carry on.
One last thing: If a post is written like shit, bring it to my attention and say nothing about it. Anyone holding a post high and hollering "DOOHOOHOO UR BANNED UR FUCKIN OUT M8" will get a warning, no questions asked. You ain't in charge.
