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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5505 on: March 03, 2014, 03:13:48 PM »
Hey guys, sorry I haven't posted in the last week; I've been oddly tired and worried about getting into the grad program I applied to.

However, I got my acceptance email, so I think I can focus a little more on this again. Just have to catch up.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5506 on: March 03, 2014, 04:18:09 PM »
Rose is apparently getting all sorts of attention.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5507 on: March 03, 2014, 04:33:05 PM »
Quote from: Elf on March 03, 2014, 04:18:09 PM
Rose is apparently getting all sorts of attention.

Which I need to catch up with!
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5508 on: March 03, 2014, 04:59:18 PM »
There's also Marius and Max's shopping trip.
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[13:38:37] Helligator: Depends on the god, but gods by definition in Nasuverse are strong because they have divine authority.
[13:38:48] Kat: Even the toilet god?
[13:38:56] Helligator: No one worships toilets.
[13:39:00] Helligator: Don't be a shitlord.
[04:32:08] Helligator: I can't make dragons in power armor like this
[19:50:12] francobull III: [...] why are you being all assive aggressive?
[23:32:37] Helligator: use the narrative as a means to convey an interesting story and cool conflicts with the openness you're allowed
[23:32:43] Helligator: not to CHEAT stories and conflicts

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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5509 on: March 03, 2014, 05:22:00 PM »
And posted for Rose, Marius and Chiyo.

Can't post for Valda because I don't even think it's my turn for that scene right now.

And I'll figure out a place to bring in my other characters sometime.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5510 on: March 03, 2014, 08:31:59 PM »
It's no problem at all, Aiden. :) IRL stuff takes priority.

Also, congratulations on your acceptance into Grad School! :D
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5511 on: March 03, 2014, 08:38:44 PM »
Yeah, congratulations.

What are you studying?
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5512 on: March 03, 2014, 08:56:00 PM »
Quote from: Cherry Lover on March 03, 2014, 08:38:44 PM
Yeah, congratulations.

What are you studying?

I already have my Bachelor's in Psychology, so now I'm going for Masters of Social Work. Going to specialize in dealing with aging populations.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5513 on: March 03, 2014, 11:49:07 PM »
@Aiden: Welcome back and congratulations / good luck with your new studies.
@YOLF: Finally wrote Casko's answer. Do tell if anything's off / weird.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5514 on: March 04, 2014, 12:24:10 AM »
Answer looks pretty fine to me, although I will note that there wasn't really anything like a sword thrust there. More like a sword simply being raised to neck height as the familiar half-materialized for that moment.

Will begin writing response posts in a bit.
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[13:38:37] Helligator: Depends on the god, but gods by definition in Nasuverse are strong because they have divine authority.
[13:38:48] Kat: Even the toilet god?
[13:38:56] Helligator: No one worships toilets.
[13:39:00] Helligator: Don't be a shitlord.
[04:32:08] Helligator: I can't make dragons in power armor like this
[19:50:12] francobull III: [...] why are you being all assive aggressive?
[23:32:37] Helligator: use the narrative as a means to convey an interesting story and cool conflicts with the openness you're allowed
[23:32:43] Helligator: not to CHEAT stories and conflicts

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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5515 on: March 04, 2014, 12:32:03 AM »
Quote from: YOLF on March 04, 2014, 12:24:10 AM
Answer looks pretty fine to me, although I will note that there wasn't really anything like a sword thrust there. More like a sword simply being raised to neck height as the familiar half-materialized for that moment.

Will begin writing response posts in a bit.
When I mean 'thrust', I meant that the motion of bringing the sword up to Casko's neck. I imagine that it was a fairly vivid move, which could've lead potentially into a decapitating strike. Not that it was the familiar's intention, but when a sword is brought up quickly to your neck, the first idea that comes to one's head is generally the one that "hey, they're trying to lop my head off".

( OwO)

If that makes any sense.
Maybe that I used the wrong word somewhere?
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5516 on: March 04, 2014, 12:46:57 AM »
"Thrust" gives me the impression that the sword was quickly pushed forward, which wasn't necessarily the case, but I didn't specify, so well, I guess it's fine as it is. I also didn't specify the distance between the tip of the half-manifested sword and Caster, so again, it's fine.
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[13:38:37] Helligator: Depends on the god, but gods by definition in Nasuverse are strong because they have divine authority.
[13:38:48] Kat: Even the toilet god?
[13:38:56] Helligator: No one worships toilets.
[13:39:00] Helligator: Don't be a shitlord.
[04:32:08] Helligator: I can't make dragons in power armor like this
[19:50:12] francobull III: [...] why are you being all assive aggressive?
[23:32:37] Helligator: use the narrative as a means to convey an interesting story and cool conflicts with the openness you're allowed
[23:32:43] Helligator: not to CHEAT stories and conflicts

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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5517 on: March 04, 2014, 12:55:26 AM »
Would 'raised' work as a suitable alternative?
<-- watches too much media where 'threatening with a sword' = pulling out sword extremely fast and holding the 'target' at a dangerously close range.
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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5518 on: March 04, 2014, 01:00:16 AM »
Like I said, it's fine. Though "raised" is a more suitable way to say it, yes.

Too sleepy, going to sleep for tonight. Will post tomorrow, anyone waiting on me.
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[13:38:37] Helligator: Depends on the god, but gods by definition in Nasuverse are strong because they have divine authority.
[13:38:48] Kat: Even the toilet god?
[13:38:56] Helligator: No one worships toilets.
[13:39:00] Helligator: Don't be a shitlord.
[04:32:08] Helligator: I can't make dragons in power armor like this
[19:50:12] francobull III: [...] why are you being all assive aggressive?
[23:32:37] Helligator: use the narrative as a means to convey an interesting story and cool conflicts with the openness you're allowed
[23:32:43] Helligator: not to CHEAT stories and conflicts

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Re: Cross Effects - Sign Up, Discussion Page
« Reply #5519 on: March 04, 2014, 05:40:02 AM »
Sorry for the delay just waiting on a certain person for their reply. (Hint it's Kaiza.)
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