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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #240 on: May 07, 2013, 02:18:49 AM »
and?

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« Reply #241 on: May 07, 2013, 02:45:40 AM »
and?

Well, that implies no friendship and definitely no visiting the house like in canon....

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #242 on: May 07, 2013, 02:57:06 AM »
not true, it just means it would be different then canon.

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« Reply #243 on: May 07, 2013, 02:58:30 AM »
not true, it just means it would be different then canon.

What do you mean?

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #244 on: May 07, 2013, 04:50:37 AM »
Sakura being raised by Kotomine could be a very interesting idea.

Not to mention if he decides to raise her as an Executioner, plus there's the whole lack of worm rape right?

Also Kotomine would have plenty of trolling opportunity as well.  He can turn Sakura against Rin, which would hurt Rin, and when Sakura mentions going to school with an idiot named Emiya Shirou, who says Kotomine wouldn't send her to spy on him?

Maybe even seduce him to bring both of them misery. Which would also make Rin miserable as well.

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #245 on: May 07, 2013, 04:55:07 AM »
Sakura being raised by Kotomine could be a very interesting idea.

Not to mention if he decides to raise her as an Executioner, plus there's the whole lack of worm rape right?

Also Kotomine would have plenty of trolling opportunity as well.  He can turn Sakura against Rin, which would hurt Rin, and when Sakura mentions going to school with an idiot named Emiya Shirou, who says Kotomine wouldn't send her to spy on him?

Maybe even seduce him to bring both of them misery. Which would also make Rin miserable as well.

fantastic as a plot set up i like it.

what do you guys think we should do with the servants and fan characters like Archerko? oh and just for the hell of it, should we have gender swaps (with other backgrounds) around in the setting?

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #246 on: May 07, 2013, 04:56:53 AM »
Rin needs her EMIYA so that shouldn't be a pairing that would be disrupted.

Plus if Kotomine has raised Sakura and she gets command spells, she's going to summon a different Servant  than Rider.  Or at least Medusa Rider.   Maybe she summons Joan of Arc.

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« Reply #247 on: May 07, 2013, 05:04:01 AM »
well the servants are still servants, but i meant what they should do during the day in general while the kids are at school.

that could work, although only red head joan, no blonde.

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #248 on: May 07, 2013, 05:13:50 AM »
Well, I assume that Archer is going to follow Rin at school and be a bit of a body guard.

Joan would be at the church, trying to save Kirei's soul.

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« Reply #249 on: May 07, 2013, 05:16:56 AM »
makes sense i think archer and joan are spot on, should ciel be a teacher?

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« Reply #250 on: May 07, 2013, 12:41:02 PM »
Sakura being raised by Kotomine could be a very interesting idea.

Not to mention if he decides to raise her as an Executioner, plus there's the whole lack of worm rape right?

Well, it wouldn't have worm rape, but certainly plenty of mind rape, given Kotomine's nature.

That's the main thing I'm worried about, that he'd actually manage to turn Sakura into someone I wouldn't be too fond of. Parents have a hell of a lot of influence over their child, after all.

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Also Kotomine would have plenty of trolling opportunity as well.  He can turn Sakura against Rin, which would hurt Rin

Well, yes, definitely. He would certainly try to turn the sisters against one another, although I'm not sure how exactly he'd accomplish that, and it would certainly have to fail at some point.

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and when Sakura mentions going to school with an idiot named Emiya Shirou, who says Kotomine wouldn't send her to spy on him?

Well, yeah, he would. The problem is that Kiritsugu (who Lantz thinks would be alive here) would see straight through that.

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Maybe even seduce him to bring both of them misery. Which would also make Rin miserable as well.

Not sure how that makes them miserable....

what do you guys think we should do with the servants and fan characters like Archerko? oh and just for the hell of it, should we have gender swaps (with other backgrounds) around in the setting?

I think having gender swaps around as well would be a bit odd, althugh maybe one or two might not be so bad.

well the servants are still servants, but i meant what they should do during the day in general while the kids are at school.

Well, what they do in canon, presumably....

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that could work, although only red head joan, no blonde.

Aww, but that means Rider won't be around, and I like Rider, especially when it comes to porn....

makes sense i think archer and joan are spot on, should ciel be a teacher?

Well, my issue is Rider. I really would like her to be around, especially since this is going to have porn. And, really, I'm not overly fond of there being another Saber clone....

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« Reply #251 on: May 07, 2013, 07:07:40 PM »
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That's the main thing I'm worried about, that he'd actually manage to turn Sakura into someone I wouldn't be too fond of.

with Ciel and joan around I doubt that.

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Well, yeah, he would. The problem is that Kiritsugu (who Lantz thinks would be alive here) would see straight through that.

not an issue really, Shirou can have friends without Kiritsugu's permission.

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I think having gender swaps around as well would be a bit odd, althugh maybe one or two might not be so bad.

I just wanted the fun ones around

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Well, what they do in canon, presumably....

so a whole lot of nothing then.

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Aww, but that means Rider won't be around, and I like Rider, especially when it comes to porn....

not true.

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Well, my issue is Rider. I really would like her to be around, especially since this is going to have porn. And, really, I'm not overly fond of there being another Saber clone....

what clone?

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Re: Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion
« Reply #252 on: May 07, 2013, 07:29:34 PM »
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That's the main thing I'm worried about, that he'd actually manage to turn Sakura into someone I wouldn't be too fond of.

with Ciel and joan around I doubt that.

Well, possibly. And, I guess Rin would still be around, even if Kotomine would be doing his best to turn Sakura against her.

How Rin would treat her is an interesting question, actually. Here she has an actual excuse to interact with her, and also probably has more reason than in canon to be worried about her guardian (since she doesn't trust Kotomine one bit). At the same time, though, Sakura won't be emotionally dead like she is canonically, and nor will she have Shinji abusing her.

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Well, yeah, he would. The problem is that Kiritsugu (who Lantz thinks would be alive here) would see straight through that.

not an issue really, Shirou can have friends without Kiritsugu's permission.

Sure, but I suspect Kiritsugu might object to her visiting....

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I think having gender swaps around as well would be a bit odd, althugh maybe one or two might not be so bad.

I just wanted the fun ones around

Well, it's probably doable, but I think we should avoid adding them for the sake of it. If you have an actual reason to want one of them around and they fit somewhat I don't see a problem.

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Well, what they do in canon, presumably....

so a whole lot of nothing then.

Well, unless the whole Grail War concept is very different, I don't see them doing anything other than watching over their master or resting to conserve energy.

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Aww, but that means Rider won't be around, and I like Rider, especially when it comes to porn....

not true.

Well, how will she be around, then?

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Well, my issue is Rider. I really would like her to be around, especially since this is going to have porn. And, really, I'm not overly fond of there being another Saber clone....

what clone?

Have you not seen Joan...?

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« Reply #253 on: May 07, 2013, 07:58:39 PM »
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Sure, but I suspect Kiritsugu might object to her visiting....

the reason she started in canon was that shirou got hurt, I doubt between kiritsugu and Ilya she'd have a reason to start visits anyways.

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Well, it's probably doable, but I think we should avoid adding them for the sake of it. If you have an actual reason to want one of them around and they fit somewhat I don't see a problem.

to fill out the town, add comedy etcetera, that's why i said the fun ones.

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Well, how will she be around, then?

summoned by another master slash method.

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Have you not seen Joan...?

you mean the fail that is nasu's version? yes but if you read my post I state clearly red head will be here as in history and with short hair too. so no clone. also you need to stop referring to things as X clone, as with joan you often get it wrong.

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« Reply #254 on: May 07, 2013, 08:08:53 PM »
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Sure, but I suspect Kiritsugu might object to her visiting....

the reason she started in canon was that shirou got hurt, I doubt between kiritsugu and Ilya she'd have a reason to start visits anyways.

Well, no, but what Elf said was that she would visit to spy on him.

I would like Sakura and Shirou to have a good relationship, and it's not obvious how since they're not in the same year.

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Well, it's probably doable, but I think we should avoid adding them for the sake of it. If you have an actual reason to want one of them around and they fit somewhat I don't see a problem.

to fill out the town, add comedy etcetera, that's why i said the fun ones.

Yeah, I did say it would be fine as long as we don't add too many....

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Well, how will she be around, then?

summoned by another master slash method.

Well, sure, but who?

That is an interesting prospect, though, particularly in terms of how she will act without Sakura to protect.

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Have you not seen Joan...?

you mean the fail that is nasu's version? yes but if you read my post I state clearly red head will be here as in history and with short hair too. so no clone. also you need to stop referring to things as X clone, as with joan you often get it wrong.

Well, OK.

"Saber clone" is a pretty good description of all the Saber look-a-likes, though.