Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

[Xamusel]

...that was a joke?

[lantzblades]

The only thing that annoys me in fan fiction is readers demanding to be spoiled or not paying attention to explanations. Notably Sakura in swords and sorcery, she wasn't raped, that would be internally inconsistent with not only the established power level given but with the theme of the event in general. It's not blindingly obvious because I don't like exposition being literally a mood killer.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

No no no no you said she was raped. You pretty much explicitly spelled that out.

[Cherry Lover]

That doesn't always mean it's true. Lantz's stuff has a first-person narrator, so all you know is what the narrator believes to be true.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

No, because it is shown to him, he even says he saw it.

[Kat]

Was she raped or not? That is like one of her gimmicks.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

Was she raped or not? That is like one of her gimmicks.

I remember the sight of Gilgamesh violating my Aunt Sakura as he snapped my little sister's neck like a twig

Yep, raped.

[lantzblades]

First person narrative is not reliable Arch, the difference between first and third is massive, so much so that the whole difference was spelled out on bl when discussing Sakura and her dark state. So no, she was not raped. He just thought she was. It was an act.

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

it was an act?

Lol gilgamesh pretended to rape her just to fuck with him

"Is he watching? Is he watching? This is so going on youtube."

[lantzblades]

Yes, no I'm not lying, it's all to completely wreck his mind.

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

you seem to misunderstand gilgamesh

If he was trying to traumatize a boy with the picture of his glorious self fucking the boy's aunt senseless, he wouldn't pretend to do it.

He'd just do it.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

you seem to misunderstand gilgamesh

If he was trying to traumatize a boy with the picture of his glorious self fucking the boy's aunt senseless, he wouldn't pretend to do it.

He'd just do it.

Exactly. Gil doesn't fuck around when he's actually giving a shit. He'd just rape her (though why he'd want Shinji's sloppy seconds is beyond me)

[lantzblades]

No, I don't, I just know the difference between canon and the events that happen to change him. This Gil is not unlike Ko Gil

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

you mean the ko-gil who knows how to let go of things like grudges and doesn't ever really want to start a fight?

@ Arch: I meant more that Gil has a thing against faking, shams, and, well...

Pretenders.

[Arch-Magos Winter]

No, I don't, I just know the difference between canon and the events that happen to change him. This Gil is not unlike Ko Gil

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha what?