Things That Annoy You in Fanfiction

[qwertyfatcat]

It was a silly thing really. The author said he'd have Shirou in Mid Childa, and that he'd do the story justice. Never went past the proclamation.

What? You're doing a spin off of that story? I see... Harry in that fic is quite........
Different. I was going to say he had certain aspects similar to Satoshi.

[Xamusel]

Yeah... let's not go into the Satoshi bit, please. I can understand what you mean, but, for the mental health of Alice, let's just avoid that topic.

Still, I had a fair bit of the spin off done, but I decided to rewrite it (because I think I had things in way too contrived a manner at the original version).

[Kat]

Anything related to Satoshi is a threat to the public health.

[qwertyfatcat]

I heard.

So what's your new idea for the spin off about?

[RamKingSpaceSlamKatsulam]

Also, it irks me when fabric writers use the word effortlessly. Effortlessly, like how they effortlessly dodge this attack, or effortlessly defeat someone. It feels demeaning to the other party.

Well, yeah, that's the point of describing it in such a way?

[qwertyfatcat]

And then fanfic writers spam the word effortlessly effortlessly.

[Kat]

Don't nitpick.

[qwertyfatcat]

Yes Ms. Person who Looks Like a Heroine I Know.

[Xamusel]

So what's your new idea for the spin off about?

Well, the spin-off was initially written in a way that was utterly contrived, with Harry and Hermione being in the Fuyuki park when Tokiomi and Sakura were a distance outside the meeting area where Sakura was supposed to be given to someone other than Zouken (before I thought to have Zouken attempt to kidnap Sakura that way, with the attempt foiled).

Now? Well, I was thinking of having Harry and Hermione end up at the Tohsaka Manor to register as citizen Magi (so to speak) after arriving in Fuyuki the way they left Hogwarts (Hermione broke a Time Turner and both she and Harry got touched by it... that, plus Harry being a practitioner of the 2nd (somewhat), took them outside of their home dimension).

[RamKingSpaceSlamKatsulam]

wtfffffffffffffffffffffff

[Xamusel]

Leo, blame the concept of the original story, which I'm spinning off of.

Normally, I wouldn't even go that far, but that limit was for canon!Harry Potter.

[qwertyfatcat]

Its confusing and contrived.

[Xamusel]

qwerty, I can understand it being confusing and contrived, but only if I knew what part of it was... could you elaborate?

[qwertyfatcat]

Alot of that plot. Unfortunately, I'm not fluent in Gumblepotter.

[Xamusel]

You mean my idea? Or the original story?