The Nasuverse in perspective.

[lantzblades]

I have you on ignore on bl because bl has loading issues, text walls (not something that should ever be on a forum) inflame the problem.

who's Andy?

[Gray]

Sorry mixed up a name in my head.

Can you expand on the the themes please?

Also grammar wise what's your hangup dyslexia? Some other condition?

[lantzblades]

Not sure how you want me to expand.

grammar wise my issue is private

[Gray]

Being quite mysterious there aren't you.

Can you at least confirm whether it is ESL, a disorder or just bad grammar?

[lantzblades]

Privacy is not mystery Gray.

[Gray]

You have anonymity thus there i no real consequence in telling me is all. I even just asked in general terms. The first two are pretty general. If you're willing to talk about depression you went through it's hard to believe you have something that's worse to share than that.
On another note how does the several million years of age, reality marble and the other things that people find questionable about his backstory help expand those themes?

[lantzblades]

There's his theme and then the story themes, they interact but are separate.

regardless of what you think Gray any further questions about my private matters is off limits.

[Gray]

Okay then. You're a little touchy, you know that?
I was asking for general picture man about the grammar issue as these excommunications seem rather constant and it just has you wonder why? If it's a treatable problem I'd just want to see if you're looking for ways to help yourself especially if you plan to write anything remotely seriously.

Alrighty. If he's your protag the story and character themes do tend to overlap heavily and a good portion of the character has to be tied with those themes. Sure you can have some extra thigns added on here and there but the if you just keep on layering on things the character loses their narrative purpose and gains many superflous (and aggravating based upon the reaction you've been getting for years) features.

[lantzblades]

Exercising my right to privacy (especially on the internet) is not touchy.

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

That may have been your intent Names but you just came off as pushy rude and insulting.

The amount of times for you that "it wasn't your intent" but you came off as the same or leagues worse without seeing yourself deserving of any blame is nigh-impossible to count.

Think about that for a second.

As for me, I recognize my failing and will work to correct it.

text walls (not something that should ever be on a forum)

This statement is stupid.

[lantzblades]

The difference is situational Names, I was very obviously uncomfortable

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

No, there is straight up no difference at all. Observe your past self and learn your failings.

[lantzblades]

Offending people is one thing names but when I know people are uncomfortable I stop being insistent about it. You didn't.

[The Man With All The Cute Boats]

What about every time you would force in another "I didn't do anything" or "Stop lying" or "stop shitting on me" when Alice was very clearly uncomfortable (angry is uncomfortable)? Did you not notice that every time you did made her angrier or something?

As said above: there was no difference at all.

[lantzblades]

Defending one's self is different, given the things she's called me I don't think defending myself is out of line.