That is much, much better. I point out however:
> Shirou can reinforce almost anything exceptionally well, including himself.
This is technically incorrect, as the only thing he's exceptional at Reinforcing are things that fit in the theme of UBW. In other words, melee weapons. Edit that and you're good to go.
> However, a shot to the head is still capable of killing him, if he does not have time to self-reinforce and/or dodge it.
Even if he's reinforced, a shot to the head with a high caliber firearm that actually strikes his skull head on will probably kill him anyways, I would say. Just wanted to comment on that.