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[Xamusel]

Ah. I see now. Thanks for clearing that up.

In the meantime, I'll be waiting for the end result, if anything.

[Alice]

Alrighty, if all goes as planned, I'm putting up three character sheets. One includes a Single Young Man for Elf to play with, hopefully along the lines of what we discussed.

But yeah, since two of these are OCs, I'd really appreciate feedback this time. Especially on Mr. Single Young Man, since he was much more spur of the moment in terms of his creation. The sheets are kinda rough just like Archer's, but I'll improve them if need be. I also don't mind changing the names on said OCs either, since the names are kinda just thrown on there. ^_^"

EDIT: ...yeaaaaahh, my lack of sleep really shows here, I think. Feedback is really appreciated, as I don't think I did a great job with these sheets.

[Daiki]

Of course participating.

[lantzblades]

Ok elf I managed despite the stupid mobile slow down to get bit of a personality description added to the profile although having read the last few addresses to me I'm not sure if I wasted my time in doing so

[Elf]

Looks like we got some interesting characters that showed up. XD

[Cherry Lover]

Yeah, I'm writing my post now, but I have a lot of stuff to deal with....

[Xamusel]

IRL or not IRL?

[Cherry Lover]

In the game, I mean.

[Xamusel]

Alright, just double-checking, Cherry.

[Elf]

In the game, I mean.

Rider is not having a very good day, is she?

[Xamusel]

I highly doubt that she is at all.

[Cherry Lover]

In the game, I mean.

Rider is not having a very good day, is she?

No, not at all. Particularly since Kiyoshi is still alone in the hotel, having almost certainly been awoken by the explosion if nothing else....

Also, Daiki, what does Shuya's "Charisma" mean in this case? How would you expect Rider to be affected by it, if at all?

[Xamusel]

I take it now's as good a time as any to continue Sephiroth's plot?

Just curious is all.

[Alice]

Yeah, Rider seems to be getting Hakuno's luck now. ^_^" ...speaking of which, lol, Archer's gonna have his hands full trying to keep Rider from hitting on her once things quiet down it seems.

Since you asked me for feedback elsewhere, Cherry, btw, you did just fine. Only thing I saw that needs correcting is Hakuno's shield dropping, since she's still struggling with it but it hasn't quite dropped yet, but it's not a biggie since it's a logical conclusion to make, and I was kinda ambiguous about it as well.

And yeah, I think you'd be fine Xam. Your stuff seems to be removed from the huge mess happening at the middle of the city, so I don't see any reason why you can't really.

EDIT: BTW, Lancer's comment made me think about something again- am I getting Archer right? ^_^" This version's generally less grumpy than the FSN version, but still, I wanna make sure I'm doing OK characterization-wise.

[Elf]

Man, if the crazy keeps happening around Forest, she's going to lose it and just start punching idiots.