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[Elf]

Pretty much so, but because they're NPCs they can be used by other characters if needed/wanted. 

True that Rider's in the best position.  And soon she'll need it.  Luckily there's an Irish Demi-God who's all to willing to share.

[Alice]

Hmm... darn, looking at the recent updates, I realized I screwed up a bit- I assumed Rider was wearing her battle costume, hence why I had Hakuno think of her as "scary." Are we allowed to go back and fix stuff like this that still doesn't change what all went down after the fact otherwise, or is it pretty much set in stone?

[Cherry Lover]

Pretty much so, but because they're NPCs they can be used by other characters if needed/wanted. 

Ah, OK, that makes sense.

True that Rider's in the best position.  And soon she'll need it.  Luckily there's an Irish Demi-God who's all to willing to share.

Lol, yeah. Although I'm not sure Rider is going to be exactly pleased about having to have sex with him, even if she knows she needs the prana.

Hmm... darn, looking at the recent updates, I realized I screwed up a bit- I assumed Rider was wearing her battle costume, hence why I had Hakuno think of her as "scary." Are we allowed to go back and fix stuff like this that still doesn't change what all went down after the fact otherwise, or is it pretty much set in stone?

I don't see why changing it would be a problem if it doesn't affect what goes on, although I guess it's up to Elf.

[Elf]

Hmm... darn, looking at the recent updates, I realized I screwed up a bit- I assumed Rider was wearing her battle costume, hence why I had Hakuno think of her as "scary." Are we allowed to go back and fix stuff like this that still doesn't change what all went down after the fact otherwise, or is it pretty much set in stone?

Well, there is an edit button on the post, so you can. XD

Lol, yeah. Although I'm not sure Rider is going to be exactly pleased about having to have sex with him, even if she knows she needs the prana.

And I doubt that Lancer's into BDSM either.

[Cherry Lover]

Lol, yeah. Although I'm not sure Rider is going to be exactly pleased about having to have sex with him, even if she knows she needs the prana.

And I doubt that Lancer's into BDSM either.

Yeah, probably not....

[Alice]

Well, there is an edit button on the post, so you can. XD

LOL, alrighty. XD I just wanted to make sure it was all kosher.

...also, reading about who needs to get prana from who, why do I get the feeling that Hakuno's going to be propositioned more than a few times in this RP? (this is what I get for posting with half functioning brain cells- please disregard my bad jokes and feel free to join the RP! We don't bite. )

[Cherry Lover]

Well, I can see Rider propositioning her, certainly. She would rather Hakuno than Lancer....

[Cherry Lover]

OK, I have a post written, but I'm having real trouble reconciling everyone's actions here. Elf, you seem to wait for Lantz to finish speaking before you speak (or, at least, you don't speak until he's mid-way through), and Alice's post goes up to when you speak. But, given that at the end of my last post Rider was about to leap after Hakuno, and Saber wouldn't have started speaking until pretty much when she landed, Rider should have acted well before the end of Alice's last post.

I'm not going to post just yet, I think I need to discuss this with Alice, and she's not on right now.

[Alice]

Well, in general what Alter says to Hakuno doesn't make much sense with what's going on- it assumes Hakuno is already saved when she's actually in even more danger at this point then she was previously. I wasn't even sure how to respond to it, to be honest. ^_^"

But yeah, I assumed that Alter was talking before Forest started to speak, which is possibly why things are out of whack.

As we discussed elsewhere though, since I OKed it, Rider can easily grab Hakuno at around the time you're referring to since she's still somewhat stunned- if it helps, I can rewrite my post a bit so less happens with Hakuno so that it makes more sense, if need be.

I think lantz may need to rewrite his posts a bit though- they don't quite gel with what's going on with everyone else, so I don't think it'd be a bad idea if he did some revising so that things flow a bit better.

We can discuss it in more detail elsewhere too if you'd like.

[lantzblades]

Given that Alter's actions thus far have been incredibly minimal the only revising I can do is to delete the post where she enters the conflict. As such just treat her as never having shown up as I'm deleting my recent post

[Alice]

Given that Alter's actions thus far have been incredibly minimal the only revising I can do is to delete the post where she enters the conflict. As such just treat her as never having shown up as I'm deleting my recent post

Well, the only real problem was some contextual stuff is all, not that Alter was there really. ^_^" Like the lid being thrown was fine, as was the chat she had with Rider, it was just the bit where she addresses Hakuno as if she's safe that sticks out. If you want to just have Alter show up at a later time or something, that's fine. I'll go ahead and revise my posts then if that's your final decision.

[lantzblades]

I've no desire to bother with continuing the scene when a basic moment of characterization is such an issue. I'm going to avoid scenes like this from now on

[Cherry Lover]

Given that Alter's actions thus far have been incredibly minimal the only revising I can do is to delete the post where she enters the conflict. As such just treat her as never having shown up as I'm deleting my recent post

Your actions haven't been "minimal", you lobbed a bin lid at me. Not to mention being generally a threat. Without your post I basically need to re-write the entirety of my posts, as does Elf.

Frankly, I think deleting your posts like that after everyone has responded to them is not at all good. You can't change what you've done after people have responded to it unless you get their permission to do so. You have basically single-handedly wrecked the RP, because I now have to go back and redo my last post, as do Elf and Alice.

[Alice]

Your actions haven't been "minimal", you lobbed a bin lid at me. Not to mention being generally a threat. Without your post I basically need to re-write the entirety of my posts, as does Elf.

Frankly, I think deleting your posts like that after everyone has responded to them is not at all good. You can't change what you've done after people have responded to it unless you get their permission to do so. You have basically single-handedly wrecked the RP, because I now have to go back and redo my last post, as do Elf and Alice.

Pretty much this- while you didn't type much, your actions did have impact, enough that it causes a huge ripple when those posts are gone. We were just asking if you could make your posts flow a bit better with everyone else's- we weren't insulting the content or anything like that. What you did though wasn't very considerate of everyone else though.

You need to be more receptive to criticism- the intent wasn't to hurt you, but to try to make things better for everyone. Responding the way you did is not a mature or considerate thing to do.

[OPOI]

Just a question, when you guys say alternate form of Shirou, does Mind of Steel Shirou count?