I went ahead and applied the edit already- pretty much everyone else ok-ed it before now (including Cherry). It was more making sure Elf was OK with it since she's the GM. Once Cherry helped me explain myself a bit better, Elf approved. It basically amounted to some extra dialogue and a few word changes to make the new dialogue make sense.
Basically, my concern was that having Archer jump the gun like that and fire Caladbolg II like that was OOC, so the only thing that's been changed is now Hakuno's ordering him to do it. Nothing else has been changed. I do still feel bad asking for it, as small as it was, but what's done is done.
As for posting... one more delay.

I may still get it up really late tonight, but to be honest, I'm not feeling so hot, so I may hold off and post tomorrow when my brain's less fried.