Lantz's fanfiction round up and discussion

[Cherry Lover]

Ever seen buso reken? Kinda like that, it changes the general dynamic for the characters so there's nothing stopping us from introducing character shifts, meet UPS friendships or whatever.

No, I've not seen that.

And, yeah, sure, but I need more indication of what will happen to design scenes or characterisation.

as for the team biti haven't gotten too detailed into thing but contend in the standard way the grail war happens

I see, so it's like in Fate/Apocryphia, where there are multiple teams?

[lantzblades]

What will happen is purely up to us. As for the second I guess, I avoid that like the plague

[Cherry Lover]

What will happen is purely up to us.

Well, yeah, but I'm not good at coming up with stuff like that completely out of the blue without any prompting. I don't even know what the goal is here (porn or otherwise), and I can't do what I usually do in a situation where I'm stuck (which is drop in random BDSM stuff) because I can't see any hooks for it here.

As for the second I guess, I avoid that like the plague

Well, OK, but it does seem to fit pretty well.

[lantzblades]

The goal is what we make it,generally a meet the characters thing is best to start with.

[Cherry Lover]

The goal is what we make it

Well, yeah, sure, but what I usually want from a fic is Sakura to be happy and lots of hot hardcore BDSM sex (preferably involving Sakura), although the two goals do admittedly tend to conflict somewhat....

generally a meet the characters thing is best to start with.

What?

[lantzblades]

In example shirou introduces the characters in monologue in fsn same sorta thing here

[Cherry Lover]

In example shirou introduces the characters in monologue in fsn same sorta thing here

Ah, OK.

Well, that does make sense, but I'm not sure it's something we can do very much on here. We know the characters already....

[lantzblades]

Not what mean, it determines who he is,knows  and how

[Cherry Lover]

Not what mean, it determines who he is,knows  and how

Ah, OK, so what you mean is that we should work out the characters and their connections?

Yeah, I guess that makes sense....

[lantzblades]

Yes exactly

[Cherry Lover]

Yes exactly

Well, OK, then, let's do it....

What is the general concept of this setting? How did all the characters get to this school etc., and how does it differ from canon?

[lantzblades]

Ok well, its one city rather than three,as such  the characters have been in the same general area for a considerable amount of time, maybe some are finds, the super natural elements hold as normal. With such a list of characters I think Kiritsugu would survive. As well as I think Ciel would have saved Sakura. That's off the top of my head

[Cherry Lover]

Well, that seems generally reasonable, although I'm not sure how someone like Arc would fit in here, since she's not a student and she's not from Misaki originally.

The Sakura thing also seems fine, but it does raise quite a few questions. For one thing, when was she saved (which affects whether Shinji was ever a dick)? Secondly, what happens to her afterwards? She could go back and live with Rin, potentially, but that would have to be set up. Otherwise, I'm not sure. Remaining with the Matous after being saved would be odd, although if Shinji never started abusing her it's possible. Ciel could also take her in, but she doesn't really seem like the type to take on a maternal role.

Also, what about Shirou? What sort of relationship would she have with him? Also, how would Kiritsugu remaining around affect his development?

[lantzblades]

Arc would be hunting Roa as in canon, how that lines up here exactly I dunno.

I would assume sometime within Zero or else between zero and fate for Sakura, after purplification but before the rest of the terribleness

I would assume the church would take her if no one else given that ciel is her rescuer

dunno about Shirou I assume he would probably already know projection with Kiritsugu's help.

[Cherry Lover]

Arc would be hunting Roa as in canon, how that lines up here exactly I dunno.

Ah, OK.

I would assume sometime within Zero or else between zero and fate for Sakura, after purplification but before the rest of the terribleness

Well, a lot of the abuse would have happened either way, because it started from the day she arrived, although Shinji wouldn't have been a dick to her.

I would assume the church would take her if no one else given that ciel is her rescuer

Well, yes, possibly, but I don't honestly trust the Church to raise such a powerful magus in a way that I would approve of, given their track record with Ciel. Plus, unless she's dumped with Kotomine (who would be even worse), she wouldn't be in Fuyuki (or the combined city).

The best solution is probably to return her to her real family, although it depends on what happens to Aoi.

dunno about Shirou I assume he would probably already know projection with Kiritsugu's help.

Yeah, quite possibly. I was thinking more personality-wise, though. Particularly if a Grail War or the equivalent happens.